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Unhapiness

الموضوع في 'اللغات' بواسطة Ǎηγα, بتاريخ ‏26 مايو 2009.

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  1. Unhapinesss


    Here's a story of a girl

    (NOT ME)














    I am 14 years old* in the 8th grade in a small school* about 300 students K-12. I have been having a rough time for the past seven months. I have been hanging around the wrong kind of crowd* which has not given me the best reputation.

    This poem is about how I have a rough life and I am not treated very fairly. Every day is a battle for me* but I still take all the blame for the things that I do wrong.
    .
    .........................................................................................

    Some nights I stay up late and cry*
    Other times I feel as if I could die!
    In my life I feel not loved*
    I always get kicked around or shoved.
    But why should I be happy?
    How can I be if I'm treated so crappy?
    Every day seems like a battle.
    I get thrown around like a baby's rattle.
    Sometimes everything can be so scary.
    Why can't I just be happy and merry?
    For all my faults* I am to blame.
    I am the one to take all the shame
     
    • أعجبني أعجبني x 2
  2. yaaaaaay
    so
    cooooool
    i am very sad for you
    i want you to be strong no matter what happen to you
    and you are avery good writer
    thanks alote
     
  3. hmmm it's not my story it's a one girl and thanxx that u like it
     
  4. oh

    very very nice poem

    thank you very much

    i like it
     
  5. wooooooooooow * soo nice meaning

    Keep It UP
     
  6. thanke you so much

    for this topic
     
  7. so sad

    but i like it alot

    thanxXxXxXxXxX
     
  8. wo0o0o0o0ow**thanx very much
     



  9. thanx 4 ur response friends and i"m happy that you all like it​
     
  10. thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx my sister i like it so much
     
    • أعجبني أعجبني x 1
  11. thanks for this poem
    but as a student in literature the rhyme here I mean in this poem it is not that good
     
    • أعجبني أعجبني x 1
  12. thanxx girl 4 the nice story
     
    • أعجبني أعجبني x 1
  13. thnx 4 ur response lil' sis

    thanx 4 ur response friend
    yeah thanx that u like it
     
  14. So sad thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnx girl friend for the great topic
     
  15. nice poem
    i like it..

    thanx so much
     
  16. ur welcomeeeeeeeee girlfriend thnx 4 ur reply
     
  17. thnx that u like and thnx again 4 ur reply
     
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