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اللغه الإنجليزية Yours and Mine

الموضوع في 'اللغات' بواسطة Yukihime, بتاريخ ‏5 ابريل 2012.

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  1. hello everyone
    I wrote a Poem and I want your Opinion

    The Title : Yours and Mine

    I'v always known you ..
    I'v always believed you ..
    I'v always loved you ..
    but in the End I'v been like bird in a cage ..
    holded by you ..
    I'v always told not to stay like that
    but I refused to change
    I'v always said I will never change
    but I was stupid in the first place
    I'v always said lies .. and you know that
    I'v always cried alone when I'm with you
    but you stayed beside me ..
    but in the End I still love you and you love me ..
    because I'm always Yours
    and you're always Mine


    Your Opinion ^^
     
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  2. جاري تحميل الصفحة...

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    What do you feel if your friend is not with you? Ask yourself اللغات ‏16 ابريل 2009

  3. AhLan​
    How are u ? Hop be Fine​
    and​
    WoOoOoOoW​
    Amazing words .like thEm so much​
    So nice​
    The Words Have Sweet Mining​
    loVe thEm​
    Keep writing sweet words​
    Ma3 aL salama​
     
    • أعجبني أعجبني x 1
  4. I bet you're a professional poem writer (=
    I like it so much
    the words are so beautiful and simple
    Keep Going ^^
     
    • أعجبني أعجبني x 1
  5. HI
    HOW ARE YOU BRO
    THE WORDS IS SO SWEET
    GOOD BYE
     
  6. not bad at all ^^ ive noticed some mistakes but as a whole its okay :) keep writting nice things,, good luck girl :p peace ~~
     
    • أعجبني أعجبني x 1
  7. Thank you Everyone for Your Opinions :)
    I'm so Happy about it ..^^..
     
  8. Hi .. !
    !? how are u
    .. OMG ...
    i like your poem
    its really nice , and warm ..
    beautiful words in every line ..
    and in every line there is a sweet meaning
    keep it up sweety , ^^
    i will wait for your next poem , : ) !
    Janah ~
     
    • أعجبني أعجبني x 1
  9. Hi there Sawa Chan ..^^..
    Thank you Sweety ^.^
    Arigato Gozimasu :oops:
    Ok =]
     
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