اللغه الإنجليزية Yours and Mine

hello everyone ​

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I wrote a Poem and I want your Opinion​

The Title : Yours and Mine​

I'v always known you ..​

I'v always believed you ..​

I'v always loved you ..​

but in the End I'v been like bird in a cage ..​

holded by you ..​

I'v always told not to stay like that ​

but I refused to change ​

I'v always said I will never change ​

but I was stupid in the first place ​

I'v always said lies .. and you know that ​

I'v always cried alone when I'm with you ​

but you stayed beside me ..​

but in the End I still love you and you love me ..​

because I'm always Yours ​

and you're always Mine ​

Your Opinion ^^​

 

I bet you're a professional poem writer (=
I like it so much
the words are so beautiful and simple
Keep Going ^^

 

HI
HOW ARE YOU BRO
THE WORDS IS SO SWEET
GOOD BYE

 

not bad at all ^^ ive noticed some mistakes but as a whole its okay keep writting nice things,, good luck girl peace ~~

 

Thank you Everyone for Your Opinions ​

I'm so Happy about it ..^^..​

 

Hi .. !​

!? how are u​

.. OMG ...​

i like your poem ​

its really nice , and warm ..​

beautiful words in every line ..​

and in every line there is a sweet meaning​

keep it up sweety , ^^​

i will wait for your next poem , : ) !​

Janah ~​

 

Hi there Sawa Chan ..^^..
Thank you Sweety ^.^
Arigato Gozimasu ​

Ok =] ​